Bright soul of Nature dreams
Of bygone rapture held.
Land’s reverie submerse
‘Neath ink corruption spoil
And cleave the dreams of earth.
Bright soul of Nature dreams.
Grey thunderclouds decayed
Evacuate the blue
Green vines last shudder still
Until in murk withdrew.
Bright soul of Nature dreams
Though loam spill hoary blood
A desecration vile
Death strokes thick branches bare
And glossy fervor dull
Bright soul of Nature dreams
Unmindful, senseless flight
Temptation wallows deep
Hark! Swift her pattern mind
Flee to transcendent sleep.
monchielle poem written for dVerse “open link night”
sister poem by SilverGardenia
milestones: first submitted work; first monchielle poem
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Wow this is such an intriguing form! Well penned ❤️
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Thank you!
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The monchielle is an interesting form. I’ll have to keep it in mind for future form poetry.
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Thank you Grace, very nice to meet you too.
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How lovely to meet you Sarah ~ Welcome to D’verse ~
I like the form and the nod to transcendent dreams ~ Slumber on ~
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A new form to me also.Very intriguing…for me there is subtext that could represent many things but made me think of DAPL and the Water Protectors.
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Hmm.. yes I suppose it could at that. I think it could mean many things as well. Glad I could introduce a new form.
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An interesting form and one that I was not familiar with, so thank you for the introduction. And well done for completing your first one!
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Thank you! I’m glad I introduced you to something new. It was a very fun form to try.
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Ah, what an interesting form.. the sense of intensity that nature can bring is palpable in your lines.
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Thank you so much, that feeling of intensity is definitely what I was going for.
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