Parched
Just as
Dry as hot
Dirt and grey-green
Sage surrounding my
Bike path through shallow hills
Made by ants and ground squirrels,
Wheels bumping over roots until
Suddenly pavement smooths the ride
And I’m tracing figure-eights around sage.
Tennis,
I think,
This old court
Like a cracked scab
Splotchy white lines still
Delineating team
Prickly Pear versus Sage Brush
Forget about former players,
Court now bleached and faded as their ghosts.
We are the only ones playing here now.
Shared on dVerse. Double Etheree poem structure.
Delightful images brought forth here. Well written.
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Thank you very much
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Children can find a fascination with the things adults no longer use and it gives those things new significance.
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Economy of word, substantial message.
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Lovely crisp writing – a real pleasure to read from start to finish
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Thank you so much, I’m so glad you enjoyed it.
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This sounds so much like the southwest… I miss it this time of year.
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This is awesome!❤️ You totally rocked this form 😀
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The deserted tennis court, so well described!
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Thank you, it was a favorite place to play as a child.
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sounds like a unique ride. nice write
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Thank you. It definitely was. This is a childhood memory brought to life.
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I like how you describe that dilapidated tennis court and your ride over bumps and such. The etheree is a fun form I think!
Gayle ~
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